Poetry upgrade, example 1

I’m still working six days a week, which is a grind, but the money will be useful. To take my mind away from it all on my lunch break, I’ve been re-writing poems to make them more accurate and truthful. Like this one..

I wandered lonely as a cloud;
So actually it must have been quite crowded, mustn’t it?
I mean - you don’t often see just one cloud up in the sky, do you?
No - they’re caused by certain atmospheric conditions which tends to see many of them alongside each other..

I’m sure there’ll be more to follow…

RC 6-7-10